Design Research Dissertation - Research Implementation: Draft Dissertation

21.4.2024 - 9.6.2024 ( Week 1- Week 7)
Gam Jze Shin / 0353154
Design Research Dissertation / Bachelor of Design (Hons) in Creative Media
Research Implementation: Draft Dissertation


Index

1. Instructions
2. 
Research Implementation: Draft Dissertation
3. Feedback


Instructions 

fig 1.1 Design Research Methodology MIB


Research Implementation: Draft Dissertation

fig 2.1 Draft Dissertation - PDF


Feedback

Week 1
General Feedback: Dr. Hayati recommended that we all complete the dissertation structure first as it will alleviate our stress and provide clarity on the information we currently possess.

Week 2
General Feedback: Dr. Hayati requests all of us to understand our own selected articles and make sure we reach the comprehensive of 80% and above.

Week 3
Specific Feedback: Dr. Hayati addressed my queries and provided me with some advice on writing the literature review.

Week 4
Specific Feedback: Dr. Hayati recommended adhering to the APA format outlined in the MIB for including citations in my literature review section.

Week 5
Specific Feedback: Dr. Hayati recommended revising the methodologies section by replacing instances of "me" with "researcher" to ensure consistency in pronoun usage. Regarding the presentation of research findings, she suggested that while the demographic section of the questionnaire could be presented in table format, other sections may benefit from alternative methods for illustrating conclusions, as there might be more effective ways to convey the information.

Week 6
Specific Feedback: First person pronouns should not be used in the dissertation; instead, third person pronouns can be used. Dr. Hayati said that must ensure the discussion section relates back to previous chapters. and demonstrate how the content from earlier chapters connects to the discussion.

Week 7
General Feedback: No feedback from Dr.Hayati as I am unable to join the consultation slot due to physical conditions.

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